Choose the Best Future Tense Story (4th)

By srtaswid

Read through the blogs of your classmates.  Choose which story you think is the best.  Reply to this post by writing the username of the winner, and then write an English translation of their story.

To recap:

        1.)  Choose a winner, someone who you thought wrote a good future tense composition.  Maybe you were possibly entertained or were impressed with their grammar skills.  Whatever the reason, pick someone.

        2.)  Then post an English translation of their future tense composition.  This is due by Friday February 15, 2008.

20 Responses to “Choose the Best Future Tense Story (4th)”

  1. Octavio Says:

    Winner: Gilberto

    In the future, I will buy an expensive car. My dad has a really fast car and i like it. In ten years I will be very rich. I will work alot with three different jobs. In three years I will go to England to watch a soccer game. Tomorow I will do all of my homework for the weekend. In five days, my family and I will watch TV because there is a new episode of Law and Order. When I am 21 years old, I am going to go to a party to drink beer really fast. In six years, I will visit Hawaii to swim in the ocean. In the future, I will be very happy and nice.

  2. simbah4 Says:

    SANTIAGO WOOOO

    I will go to the store today. I will need to buy food for school. I will drink a lot. After, i will need to go to work. I will work everyday. At night I am exhausted. I want to jump for joy. I will have a comfortable bed waiting for me. I know that i will fall asleep. I hope this doesn’t happen again.

    Best story I’ve ever heard.

  3. gabil2 Says:

    Margerita Eason’s

    En el futuro quereré trabajar en el centro comercial. Tomaré muchos vacaciones e iré a México, Hawaii y Alaska. Diré yo quiero un gato y dos perros, pero teneré niños en lugar. Compraré un grande casa y dos coches en el futuro. Pasaré mi escuela vieja y hablaré a mi amigos vieja. Haré galletas con mi niños en mi cocina. Manejaré a través de los Estados Desatados de América con me familia. Miraré muchos películas con mi niños, como Cinderella o 101 Dalmatians. Moveré a Florida y viviré una vida muy feliz con mi familia. Visitaré mi madre y padre en Michigan y mi tío y tía en Wisconsin.

    translation: In the future I will want to work at the mall. I will take a lot of vacations and go to Mexico, Hawaii and Alaska. I will say I want a cat and 2 dogs but I will have kids instead.I will buy a big house and 2 cars in the future. I will pass my old school and will talk to my old friends. I will eat cookies with my kids in my kitchen. I will drive across the United States with my family. I will watch a lot of movies with kids like Cinderella or 101 Dalmations. I will move to Florida and I will live a happy life with my family. I will visit my Mom and Dad in Michigan and my Uncle and Aunt in Wisconsin.

  4. raulh4 Says:

    i chose symba as my favorite, his story goes…..

    In the future, I will work for a lot of money. Later, I will buy the DVD of The Office season 4. I will have all the DVDs. I will watch them over and over. Tomorrow I will go to school and later to the dance. Me and my friends will jump during crazy songs. I am a good dancer. We will be exhausted after. My friends and I will take a lot of water. At the end of th wee I have a soccer game to play.

    yeaaaaaaa symba.

  5. tigrew4 Says:

    1.) Pedro
    2.)In the future, I will be a pilot for the Air Force. My dad is a pilot also, and I will go to the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs. I will not buy a car for myself because they are not allowed. The mountains will make it difficult to breathe. We will march everywhere in the Academy. If I can, I will fly an F-15. An F-15 is the plane that my dad flew. I will play intramural football. I will visit my uncle and aunt every weekend because they live in Colorado Springs. Flying will be fun.

  6. Mateo22 Says:

    i think jacobos was the best….

    in the future i will have alot of friends. i will find all the money i need. i will not be ready or funny. WWWWWWEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLL i will take every thing and leave nothing. soon i will jump into little boys…..no…lol. i will not be an important person. i will blog all day long. i will listen to music of eminem and Barry Manilow because i do not like juarez. will not write ten prayers in spanish for all of time. i will not pass dangerous gas. the end

    mateo 22

  7. gabrielas4 Says:

    1.) For the best future tense story I chose Octavio
    2.)Tomorrow I will go to the mall. I will buy the electric car and the electrical appliances. Soon, I will work in my house with my friends. We will have many board games. We will take many drinks and we will eat hamburgers with French fries. Soon Santiago will come to my house. We will play ping pong and I will win. In the end, we will watch television and we will do pizza. My favorite program is Man vs. Wild. Bear Grills is very handsome.

  8. margaritae4 Says:

    (lolap4)

    1. I will be able to jump high, will you?
    2. I will like to eat fruits.
    3. I will want to go to Florida.
    4. I will not like to go.
    5. They will take long walks.
    6. He will want to buy a new camera.
    7. I will spend time to my life as a protector.
    8. I will need to be a nurse.
    9. I will want to have two cats.
    10. I will like to take the baseball

  9. Don Gordo P. 4 Says:

    Hmm… I appear to be the first one to do this…. Probably because I don’t have to worry about doing a research paper…

    My choice was Pedro Dimeff. The english translation of his monologue goes as follows:

    In the future, I will be a pilot for the Air Force. My dad is a pilot also, and I will go to the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs. I will not buy a car for myself because they are not allowed. The mountains will make it difficult to breathe. We will march everywhere in the Academy. If I can, I will fly an F-15. An F-15 is the plane that my dad flew. I will play intramural football. I will visit my uncle and aunt every weekend because they live in Colorado Springs. Flying will be fun.

  10. palomab4 Says:

    Manaña pasaré me examen en el clase de matemáticos. Después tomaré a examen en el clase de inglés. Iré el clase de quimica y a experiment poco. A la postre iré me casa. Seré con me familia y relajarse. Tendré a buen noche. Jugaré muchos de video juegos. Comeré mucho punchkis. A punto fijo leeré dos libros. Al caer de la noche iré me cama y como por ensalo dormiré a pierna suelta. by Tomasm4

    translation: tommarow i will have a test in math. after i will have a test in english class. i will go to chemistry and do a small experiment. then i will go home. i will relax with my family all night. i will play video game and eat punchkis.then i will read 2 books. then i will go to my bed and get a very good night’s sleep.

  11. pedrod4 Says:

    I chose Don Gordo Platt

    In the future, there will be a large war among many nations. Some of the nations that will be involved are The United States, Spain, Germany, Great Britain, and Russia. Many people will die, but for a good cause. After Russia returns to communism, the number of nuclear weapons will increase a lot. The United States will step in after Russia conquers France in one day. The good history between The United States and Great Britain will prove to be valuable during the war. Germany will ally with Russia, because the leader will not be paranoid this time. The United States will send an elite team of soldiers to Europe to destroy the atomic bombs. Russia will not recover from this setback and will be forced in a democratic government. The United States will win the war, defeating Germany and capturing Berlin.

  12. PatricioW4 Says:

    Tonis4
    In the future, I will study a lot of books. I will do my homework. My homework is very difficult. I will need to buy a pencil and a calculator for my homework. I will have three hours for my homework. I will go to my house with my family after school. I will need to work with my brother for his homework. He will do his homework. We will eat apples. We will annoy my sister. I am very tired now. I will write tomorrow.

  13. santiagog4 Says:

    in the future i will have a lot of money. then i will buy the office season 4. i will have all of the dvd’s. i will watch them all the time. tomorrow i will go to school then i will go to the dance. my friends and i will jump durring the wild songs. i am the best dancer. we will be tired after.my friends and i will drink a lot of water. on the weekend i have a soccer game.

  14. julioj4 Says:

    This is a translation of Gilberto’s story:

    In the future, I will buy a car. My dad has a car that is very fast and I like it a lot. In ten years, I will be very rich. I will work three jobs. In three years I will go to England to see a soccer match. Tomorrow I will do all my homework for the weekend. In five days, my family and I will watch television, because there is a new episode of Law and Order. When I am 21 years old I will go to a party and drink a lot of pop very fast. In six years, I will visit Hawaii to swim in the sea. In the future I will feel very happy and nice.

  15. santiagog4 Says:

    Yo iré a la tienda hoy. Yo necesitaré comprar comida por escuela. ¡ you tomaré mucho ! Después yo necesitaré ir trabajo. Yo trabajaré todos los días. Por la noche soy agotado. Yo quando termina saltaré. Yo tendré una cama cómoda esperando para me. Yo se que me dormiré. Yo espero pasaré otra vez.

  16. gilbertoh4 Says:

    Octavio Mehregan’s: Tomorrow, I am going to go to the mall. I am going to buy an electic car and electrical appliances. Then I am going to wokr in my house with my friends. I have many board games. We will drink drinks and eat hamburgers with french fries. Then, santiago will come to my house. We will play pong pong and I will win. Finally we will watch television and make pizza. My favorite show is Man vs. Wild. Bear Grylls is very hot.

  17. albertol4 Says:

    unos4
    Manaña iré al Toledo. Compraré zapatos en el centro commercial. Luego trabajaré. Después hablaré por telefono. Visitaré mi papa. Haceremos algo diversion. Teneremos un tiempo bueno. Caminaremos en el parqué. Patinaremos en el heilo en el lago. Luego cantaremos.

    Tommorow I will go to toledo. I will buy shoes the mall. Then I will work. After I will talk on the phone. I will visit my dad. We will do something else. We will have a good time. We walk in the park. We will paint the lake. Then we will sing.

  18. TomasM4 Says:

    (palomas blog)

    I will go toa guitar concert. I have not talked to my mom but tomarrow i will. I have not studied but tomarrow i will. I will look at Davinchi’s art collection tomarrow. I will go to a Juanes concert. My mom will visit on tuesday. We will go swimming. We will talk all night. My stepdad has to work during the week. He will not visit tuesday.

  19. diegop4 Says:

    In the future, i will be a pilot for the airforce. My dad was a pilot and i will go to the Airforce Academy in Colorado. I will not buy a car because it is not allowed. The mountains will make it difficult to breathe. We will march everywhere in the academy. If i can, I will fly a F-15. The F-15 is the fighter jet my dad flew. I will play intermurral football. I will visit my aunt and uncle every weekend because they live in Colorado Springs. Flying will be fun.

    Pedrod4

  20. tonis4 Says:

    i chose Patricks

    Esta noche, después la composición, yo me ducharé. Luego, estudiaré para la historia de Estados Unidos. Llevo una vida agitada. No duemo lo suficiente. La mañana, tomo mucho mucho café. Antes de esta vida, mi vida fue muy simpáctica. Yo hacía mi tarea y iba a la escuela. Ahora, trabajo en mi restaurante. También, dormiré cuatro horas. Y, yo habré ir al colegio mañana o en efecto, hoy porque es las doce de la noche! Haré mi tarea durante la fin de semana, pero trabajaré el viernes.

    Its night, after my composition, i will sleep. Later I will study for United States history. I am leading a hectic life. I don’t sleep enough. Tomorrow, i will drink alot of coffee. Before this life, my life was very nice. I worked on my homework and went to school. Now, i work in my restaurant. Also, i will sleep four hours. And i have to go to high school tomorrow or actually, today because its 12 at night!. I will do my homework during the weekend, for i will work on friday.

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